Page 10. end of the 2nd issue so far!

After much deliberation over the appearance of Sabre rival character Talon, I was ready to begin the final page of the 10 page preview book.

 

 

10 pages being divisible by 4 and allowing for a cover, inside front cover introduction and then inside back-cover/back cover ad pages.

Panel 1,

really I need to get back in there and use a whit line to help the characters pop from the background,

Panel 2,

well at distance it looks good but closer up you can see it was really free hand perspective and some of the pillar bases look terrible. Notice the little moo chap being helped up? Think the added shadow helped show they were heading outside into light.

Panel 3.

 

Really quiet happy with this, I think the perspective on the building helped also for me there's a shadow I put under the roof of the temple and it really alone helped the building look like its being struck by the rising sun. you may notice that this panel and the last panel meant we really didn’t get a good look at talon, until you read the full comic!

Spent a bit of time inking this page, especially the mountain.

Panel4

 

This panel worked quit well, used simple motion lines for the snow and feathers the idea being there’s wind built up from the flapping wings of our landing allies!