Overall I’m very
happy with the page. Has been said that perhaps panel 1 and 2 of Golbre reflecting
isn’t too clear, but I always thought at that time if it was published id have
it coloured and this would help define everything. Very lazy attitude, true though
it is that colouring would do that and the whole idea of the character looking
either side to reflect would be clearer. Now I’m a lot more certain that it
needs to be defined in black and white first. You can’t rely on colour to carry
your ideas.
Actually the
whole idea of this top panel is based on something I saw on tv about body language.
How we look one way to reflect on the past and picture those events and then we
look the other to imagine things. So on the left we see him reflecting on how
he and his partner (Jojin, no idea why sabres grandmother is called that but
that’s what I wrote down) meet the ambassador of the snakerz (with actual adder
markings that we get here in the UK). Then on the right he’s picturing that
current threat, arch enemy, HuSub! Gripping stuff! ;)
Panel 2/3
depends how you look at it!
This idea I saw
in an X-men book by John Romita jr, it had Xavier telling of his origin and
meeting with magneto. The idea being that your seeing into the mind’s eye of
the person talking. In this case it’s the Moo father talking about how Moo had
shown them visions of Izner and the drones taking the stone of fate and him
touching it (as this caused sabres dad in the first issue to grow more muscular
and the destiny blade appeared in his hands. What effects will it have…? TBH I’ve
not really decided yet but in the last panel I show Izner’s eyes are glowing
with Kirby crackle power and he is looking a little more ripped!
This is the new
drone designs. The overall theme of my comic from day one was to tell a personal
tale but with conan meets sonic (or Starfox meets Zelda, or just Starfox
adventures). With this in mind the sonic hedgehog element being the kidnapping
of fluffy nice animals being transformed into mindless zombie robot villains.
Also if you’re a warhammer 40k fan like I was, I thought about interchangeable weapons.
One of which being the power glove so that’s what I had in my mind. Then one
quiet day at the telemarketing place I was working at I drew this in biro. Then
later settled on this as how they would appear in the book.
So heres the ‘new’
drones and Iznar touching the stone (dun, dun, duuun!) in the flames of a
vision fire set by the church of moo! Chanting “Cows eat grass, grass is
nature, nature is all as is moooo!”
Yep, never
claimed to be a creative genius!
Finally the
glowing eyed Iznar as they kick over the plinth that held the stone and the not
so dynamic looking drones walking off with it also not too thrilled by the one
keeping look out in the back ground.
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